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Jln. Panglima Sudirman
Lumajang
October 2010
Lumajang
October 2010
Dear Baihaqi
How are you ? I hope you are fine. When you visit my home ?
Last week, I want to go to your house at 08.00 o’clock.I went there by motorcycle. In the travelling, I aw a beautiful village.
In the travelling my motorcycle was out of gas. I bought the gasoline in te gas station. After that I continued the traveling.
Finally, I didn’t go to your house. Iam so sorry…..!
That’s all. Please reply this letter with your experience on last holiday and reply it quickly. See you………
Your Friend
(Billy)
-my motorcycle out of gas -> my motorcycle was out of gas
-I buy the gasoline -> I bought the gasoline
-After then I continue -> After that I continued
-Finally, I don’t to your house -> I didn't go to your house.
That's all correction for your letter. You get 80, OK?